My conflict of the story is external, men vs. men, include some man vs. oneself. The girl was locked in the basement by her parents for sixteen years. Her parents were too worry about the dangerous outside world, they thought the best way to protect their daughter is to seclude her from the world. The girl never told her parents about she yearn for going out to see and feel the world by herself. She knew all her parents do is for her, but it was just not a right way. She was afraid to tell her parents because it might break their hearts, as well as if she just find a chance and leave. But she didn’t have chance to escape, the door of the basement was always locked. Also, she have never been to the outside world, did she really know how to service? She could not be sure about that, she learned the things about outside world from the books, and sometimes books are not enough for her. If she get the chance to go, should her follow her dream and go? Should her tell her parents about what she want and convince them to let her go? She didn’t know what to do and she was more melancholy day by day.
I think maybe the girl could try to tell her parents that she really wanted to go outside in a smooth and nice way, I think she can try it,and your story makes me think about this problem, it is a nice story.
ReplyDeleteYou narrative the girl's mood that full with confuse and worry. It let us know what is the hinder for her to go out the door. It’s very clear and powerful.
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