Wednesday, April 10, 2013

journal 15: Hip Hop Langage


Grammar is not complex
My teacher told me to relax
But after I got a F on my last test
He shook his head with wrath
“I know it’s hard to you.”
he said,
“But that can’t be the excuse.
Go home to study and improve,
Show me what you can do.”
So I went home with my heavy step
Hope my mother won’t be mad
I was sad
My confidence liked a flat

I try to concentrate in the Saturday morning
But My cellphone is ringing
My sister is singing
The dogs outside are barking
A terrible song is playing
repeat and repeat
Is god kidding me

Well, let’s see
Noun, verb, and adjective
What is S?
What means V?
Who says it’s easy
I just can’t see
Could, can, may and might
What is the difference?
Can somebody tell me what the difference is?
When should I put “the”
When should I use “A”
How is you?
Who are she?
Why did the Lotso said: “She DON’T love you.” in the movie?
If you are wondering my feeling
The grammar is driving me crazy


I think it sounds more like a poem.I was trying to express my feeling to grammar, that how grammar is complicated for me. I know I got a bad grammar, I'll try to improve on that.

1 comment:

  1. Grammar confused me all the time too! And it really discerned most of people's feeling, also you don't need to worry if this sound like pome. You just need to read it quick and with the tempo!

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